Fe'ao What a great recount that you wrote about doing Yoga. I thought that it was fantastically excellent that you put a cartoon and also inserted a picture into your writing so it gave the reader (me in this case) more of an idea about what was going on. I also like that you wrote about how hard it was and that made me think that Yoga could be tricky and not always fun. Mr Webb and Room Three, Auroa Primary School, Taranaki. mrwebbauroa.blogspot.com
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great recount that you wrote about doing Yoga. I thought that it was fantastically excellent that you put a cartoon and also inserted a picture into your writing so it gave the reader (me in this case) more of an idea about what was going on. I also like that you wrote about how hard it was and that made me think that Yoga could be tricky and not always fun.
Mr Webb and Room Three, Auroa Primary School, Taranaki.
mrwebbauroa.blogspot.com